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It is said that the 21st century is the Information Age. With the great changes that the Internet gives us，it seems that nowadays a man can’t live without the Internet.But what actually caused that？
Firstly，the Internet makes people closer. Using the Internet，we are able to communicate our family，our friends or whoever we want to keep in contact with at any time we prefer.
Secondly，we are given more changes to get to know our world well. Also，we are not going to miss any information by the Internet.
Lastly，we can not only reveal our inner worlds but express our feelings as well by making full use of the Internet so as to meet new friends.
It is no doubt that the Internet plays an important role in our life， and however， it sometimes is harmful to our life，too. So，how to use the Internet to assist ourselves will become a hot spot in the near future.
教师点评：文章主题明确，重点突出，条理清晰。文章首先说了网络拉近了人们之间的关系，便于交流；第二说明我们有更多机会了解到更多信息；最后，说明我们可以通过网络认识更多的朋友。虽然文章不长，但是开头比较吸引人，每一点都叙述的很清楚，几乎没有什么语法错误。
（指导老师：曾平英）
Firstly，the Internet makes people closer. Using the Internet，we are able to communicate our family，our friends or whoever we want to keep in contact with at any time we prefer.
Secondly，we are given more changes to get to know our world well. Also，we are not going to miss any information by the Internet.
Lastly，we can not only reveal our inner worlds but express our feelings as well by making full use of the Internet so as to meet new friends.
It is no doubt that the Internet plays an important role in our life， and however， it sometimes is harmful to our life，too. So，how to use the Internet to assist ourselves will become a hot spot in the near future.
教师点评：文章主题明确，重点突出，条理清晰。文章首先说了网络拉近了人们之间的关系，便于交流；第二说明我们有更多机会了解到更多信息；最后，说明我们可以通过网络认识更多的朋友。虽然文章不长，但是开头比较吸引人，每一点都叙述的很清楚，几乎没有什么语法错误。
（指导老师：曾平英）