【问题生成】在连续两次作文中,笔者所带班级的一位学生用了“航船”的情境创意开头,虚实结合,颇具表现力。作文《平流缓进》的开头:持一支细桨,纵一叶扁舟,赏粼粼碧波,听习习清风,于平流中缓缓划行。平淡人生,鲜有惊涛骇浪,而智者会在平缓中划出轻盈与充实。《用,在关键时》的开头:帆船在大海上航行,一支细浆 [Problem Generation] In two consecutive essays, one student of the class I brought used “Situations and Creativity” of “Sailboat” to start with the combination of actual situation and actual situation. Composition of “advection slow” the beginning: holding a fine propeller, vertical leaf boat, tours sparkling blue waves, listen to learn the breeze, slowly easers in the stratosphere. Plain life, little stormy waves, and wise men will be drawn in the light and full of light. At the beginning of “Use, at the point of time”: sailing in the sea, a fine pulp