最近不少同学问我这么一个问题:我的作文写得很幼稚,怎么办?在我看来,并不是所有的幼稚都需要改变,有的幼稚恰恰是一种风格。这不能一概而论。当然,这两种幼稚需要警惕:一是思维上的肤浅。比如,看见老人捡垃圾,就说这个社会冷漠,没有人去帮助他。有时候,写作者根本没搞清楚事实(比如,这个老人或许很有钱,或许在做公益活动),就根据自己的想象,匆忙下结论,把一些毫无相关的东西关联起来,这种幼稚的写法危害很大。二是喜欢把小事夸大。比如,阴雨后看见了太阳,就说太阳是无私的,万物靠它的 Recently, many students asked me such a question: my composition is very naive, how to do? In my opinion, not all of the naive need to change, and some naive is precisely a style. This can not be generalized. Of course, these two naive need to be wary: First, the superficial thinking. For example, when you see an old man picking up rubbish, you say that the society is indifferent and no one will help him. Occasionally, writers simply do not understand the facts (for example, the old man may be very rich, perhaps doing public welfare activities), according to his own imagination, hurriedly concluded that some irrelevant things related to this naive The wording of the great harm. Second, like to exaggerate the trivial matter. For example, when you see the sun after a rainy day, you say that the sun is selfless and that everything depends on it