撰写中学生作文评语的艺术晓帆（新干县教研室）有的教师在批改学生作文时，往往忽视了评语撰写这一重要的工序：有的评语空洞无物，让学生恹恹然；有的评语信马由缰，使学生茫茫然；还有的评语冷嘲热讽，令学生惊惊然。这样一来，致使学生畏作文如虎，谈作文色变，写作文... Some teachers writing Xiaoshuo (Xinqian County Teaching and Research Office) who wrote composition comments for secondary school students often ignored the important process of writing comments when they were writing student compositions: Some comments were empty and confusing for students; The students were stunned; other comments were ridiculous and shocking to the students. As a result, students are afraid of writing like a tiger, talking about composition changes, writing...