近几年看了一些英语专业毕业生的英译汉习作,发现有的译文晦涩难懂,不知所云,但核对一下原文,却又似乎字字可以紧扣。另一种情况则相反,译文颇通顺,但一加对照,却与原文相去甚远。例如:例1.…and finally,in an unpleas-ant atmosphere of mutual recimi-na tion,Mr Zorin walked out of thedisarmament commission,demand-ing that“future negotiations In recent years, I have read some English translations of English graduates and found that some of the translations are obscure and incomprehensible. But to check the original, it seems that the words can be closely linked. The other situation is the opposite. The translation is quite fluent, but it is a far cry from the original. For example: Example 1....and finally, in an unpleas-ant atmosphere of mutual recimi- cation, Mr Zorin walked out of the disarmament commission, demand-ing that "future negotiations