余联浦:从此幅作品来看作者具有一定的楷书功底。作品一气呵成,章法得体,此作有欧体的影子,但仔细品味有以下不成熟的看法。一、从字的结体上看,有的字如“归”“海”“何”等结构松散,重心不稳。二、整幅作品力感欠佳。也许是作者心里紧张的原因,在运笔的过程中产生了点画不到位的现象。如“处”“下”“卧”等字的竖画软绵无力。 Yu Lianpu: From this work, the author has a certain regular script skills. Works at one go, the Constitution is decent, this has the shadow of the European Community, but carefully taste the following immature views. First, the words from the knot point of view, some words such as “back ” “sea ” “He ” and other structures loose, center of gravity instability. Second, the entire work force is not good. Perhaps the reason for the author’s nervousness, in the process of writing a pen point is not in place phenomenon. Such as “office ” “under ” “lying ” and other words of vertical painting soft and weak.