今年我省高考作文题命得有新意,在具备相应的限制性的前提下,给了考生很大的选择、发挥、创造空间。本来预料广大考生会写出相当精彩的作文来,然而,学生作文的情况并不能令人满意。总体上来看,犯的幼稚病有以下四种。一、泛泛而谈,无中心或多中心部分考生害怕离题,或没有重视、 This year’s provincial college entrance examination essay has a new idea. Under the premise of corresponding restrictions, it gives candidates a lot of choice, play, and create space. It was expected that the majority of candidates would write wonderful essays. However, the situation of student writing was not satisfactory. In general, there are four types of childish illnesses. First, the general discussion, no center or multi-center candidates are afraid of digression, or lack of attention,