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在英语短文写作中，运用高级词汇、短语和复杂结构，不但能生动、准确地表达内容，还能体现作者的语言功底。所以，一篇高考短文写作有打动阅卷老师的“闪光点”，才有获得高分的机会。以2012年高考为例，我们来学习一下短文写作的十大高分策略。
一、使用高级词汇及最佳搭配，使文章表达生动形象。
1. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. （湖南卷）
2. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. （湖南卷）
3. I could not help sobbing at that moment. （湖南卷）
4. He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. （广东卷）
5. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. (浙江卷)
6. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. （山东卷）
二、使用同位语、介词短语、短语介词及with复合结构，使句子更加精炼。
1. Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. （陕西卷）
2. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place. （江苏卷）
3. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. （辽宁卷）
4. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. （山东卷）
三、使用非谓语动词，使句子简洁。
1. As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.（辽宁卷）
2. As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. (陕西卷)
3. Entering the classroom, Ms Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” (陕西卷)
4. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. （江苏卷）
5. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. （江苏卷）
四、使用恰当的承接短语，使文章过渡自然，条理清晰。
1. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. （全国I卷）
2. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. （辽宁卷）
3. All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off. （山东卷）
4. To be honest, it was Su s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. （江苏卷）
5. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. (湖北卷)
6. The black pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. (北京卷) 7. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. （江苏卷）
8. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. (江西卷）
五、使用插入语和省略句，缓和或加重语气，增加文章的色彩。
1. As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.（辽宁卷）
2. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. （辽宁卷）
3. After careful consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. (安徽卷)
4. As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. （山东卷）
5. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot. （山东卷）
6. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. （山东卷）
7. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. （四川卷）
六、使用并列句及it句型，使句子凝练，层次清晰；such as句型使句子结构精巧，对称和谐。
1. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. （辽宁卷）
2. I hope this opportunity will not only make you happy, but also satisfy your interest in Chinese operas. (天津卷)
3. It was not an easy choice for me to make. (安徽卷)
4. It was five years ago when I was in a junior middle school that Xiaohei and I went out by bus. （湖南卷）
5. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. (湖北卷)
6. It’s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. (浙江卷)
7. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. (浙江卷)
8. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. （山东卷）
9. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading? （江西卷）
10. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.（江苏卷）
七、使用被动句，丰富了语言，增强了语言的表现力。
1. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. （全国 I卷）
2. High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. (安徽卷)
3. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!” (陕西卷) 4. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. (浙江卷)
5. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. (全国II卷)
八、用名词性从句使句子之间自然地、巧妙地连接起来，避免文章平淡无味。
1. What we lost sometimes can be returned in different ways. （湖南卷）
2. Immediately looking for him was the whole thing I did but it was a pity. （湖南卷）
3. Ms Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. (陕西卷)
4. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. (浙江卷)
5. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers. （江西卷）
6. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. （四川卷）
九、用定语从句使句子意思连贯，逻辑严密。
1. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. （全国I卷）
2. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision. (安徽卷)
3. In 2012, he received his fourth degree by network learning, who was praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule. （广东卷）
4. What’s more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process. （山东卷）
5. In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. （山东卷）
6. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. （江苏卷）
十、使用倒装句，突出强调句首成分，使叙述或描绘更加生动形象。
1. Only from that moment on have I understood the deep feeling of sympathy. （湖南卷）
2. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. (湖北卷)
3. Only by practice will we make more progress.（山东卷）
一、使用高级词汇及最佳搭配，使文章表达生动形象。
1. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. （湖南卷）
2. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated. （湖南卷）
3. I could not help sobbing at that moment. （湖南卷）
4. He thinks it is never too late to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. （广东卷）
5. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. (浙江卷)
6. Finally, some good English study websites contribute a lot to my improvement. （山东卷）
二、使用同位语、介词短语、短语介词及with复合结构，使句子更加精炼。
1. Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. （陕西卷）
2. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place. （江苏卷）
3. What’s more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. （辽宁卷）
4. By talking with them, my oral English improved a lot. （山东卷）
三、使用非谓语动词，使句子简洁。
1. As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.（辽宁卷）
2. As Teachers’ Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. (陕西卷)
3. Entering the classroom, Ms Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers’ Day!” (陕西卷)
4. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. （江苏卷）
5. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. （江苏卷）
四、使用恰当的承接短语，使文章过渡自然，条理清晰。
1. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. （全国I卷）
2. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. （辽宁卷）
3. All in all, every road leads to Roma, but I believe hard work pays off. （山东卷）
4. To be honest, it was Su s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. （江苏卷）
5. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. (湖北卷)
6. The black pencil, on the other hand, remains calm. (北京卷) 7. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game. （江苏卷）
8. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. (江西卷）
五、使用插入语和省略句，缓和或加重语气，增加文章的色彩。
1. As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.（辽宁卷）
2. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. （辽宁卷）
3. After careful consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. (安徽卷)
4. As a high school student, I consider English a very important subject. （山东卷）
5. In order to learn it well, apart from English class, I took an active part in English corner and other after-class English activities, which benefit me a lot. （山东卷）
6. As a saying goes, practice makes perfect. （山东卷）
7. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. （四川卷）
六、使用并列句及it句型，使句子凝练，层次清晰；such as句型使句子结构精巧，对称和谐。
1. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. （辽宁卷）
2. I hope this opportunity will not only make you happy, but also satisfy your interest in Chinese operas. (天津卷)
3. It was not an easy choice for me to make. (安徽卷)
4. It was five years ago when I was in a junior middle school that Xiaohei and I went out by bus. （湖南卷）
5. My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. (湖北卷)
6. It’s true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. (浙江卷)
7. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. (浙江卷)
8. I keep on doing it these years and it is helpful to my English. （山东卷）
9. Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading? （江西卷）
10. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.（江苏卷）
七、使用被动句，丰富了语言，增强了语言的表现力。
1. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. （全国 I卷）
2. High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. (安徽卷)
3. The blackboard was decorated with beautiful words, which read “Happy Teachers’ Day!” (陕西卷) 4. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. (浙江卷)
5. Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games. (全国II卷)
八、用名词性从句使句子之间自然地、巧妙地连接起来，避免文章平淡无味。
1. What we lost sometimes can be returned in different ways. （湖南卷）
2. Immediately looking for him was the whole thing I did but it was a pity. （湖南卷）
3. Ms Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. (陕西卷)
4. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands. (浙江卷)
5. But what interests me most is literary books, especially those by famous writers. （江西卷）
6. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. （四川卷）
九、用定语从句使句子意思连贯，逻辑严密。
1. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. （全国I卷）
2. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision. (安徽卷)
3. In 2012, he received his fourth degree by network learning, who was praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule. （广东卷）
4. What’s more, I can learn some learning skills and methodologies, which play an important part in my study process. （山东卷）
5. In the English corner, I meet many friends, who share the same interest with me. （山东卷）
6. To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. （江苏卷）
十、使用倒装句，突出强调句首成分，使叙述或描绘更加生动形象。
1. Only from that moment on have I understood the deep feeling of sympathy. （湖南卷）
2. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. (湖北卷)
3. Only by practice will we make more progress.（山东卷）