“当时我真的很得意,只顾着笑,还要拍照留念。完全没有留意到它哭了。是因为疼吗?还是怨恨这是一场不公平的游戏。如果钓鱼的人,嘴里也含着鱼钩来搏斗。输了的鱼,是不会流泪的。”以此段话为材料,以“公平”为话题,写一篇八百字的评论文章。一个多月过去了,上次模拟考试的这道作文题,仍不时地纠缠着我,让我这个高三语文老师无法释怀。在阅卷的时候,我惊讶地发现,一半以上的学生,对这段 “At that time I was really proud, just laughing, but also take a picture taken. Did not notice it was crying. Is it because of pain? Or resentment This is an unfair game .If the person fishing, mouth With a hook to fight. Lost fish, it will not shed tears. ”“ With this passage as a material, ”fair " as a topic, write an eight hundred words of commentary. More than a month later, the essay question of the last mock exam still entangled me from time to time, making me a senior third language teacher can not be relieved. When scoring, I was surprised to find that more than half of the students were right about it