【失误原文】路上的风景张涵七月的一个周六早晨,太阳似乎也睡饱了,起得格外早,伸展着筋骨,阳光肆意地洒在大地上。街边的香樟树随着时有时无的风有节奏地摆动着。我依然像往常一样乘公交车去补习班上课。(开篇景物描写还可以。“我依然像往常一样乘公交车去补习班上课。”可以提到下段,与下段第一句合二为一。)我独自站在站台,阳光辣辣地刺在身上。我焦急地等着 On the Saturday morning in July, the sun seemed to be asleep, playing especially early, stretching bones, the sun sprinkled indiscriminately on the ground. Camphor trees along the street with time-bound no wind rhythmically swinging. I still take the bus to take classes as usual. (The description of the opening scene is ok.) “I still go to the cram school as usual.” "I can mention the next paragraph, combined with the first sentence of the next paragraph.) I stand alone on the platform, the sun spicy Stab on the body. I am anxiously waiting