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课堂上,我出示了一个病句:“我们要继承和发扬老一辈的革命事业。”让同学们修改。大家看后,即有人举手。我让一名同学先找出错误的地方,再修改。这个同学回答说:“‘发扬’和‘事业’搭配不当。去掉‘和发扬’。”并把修后的句子念了一下。我肯定了他的回答,转而问大家:“‘发扬’可以和哪个词搭配?这个句子还有别的改法吗?”一名同学回答:“‘发扬’可以和‘传统’搭配。这句还可改为‘我们要发扬老一辈的革命传统。’”又有几名同学相继发言,把这句改为“我们要继承老一辈的革命传统。”“我们要继承和发扬老一辈的革命传统。”“我们要继承老一辈的革命事业,发扬老一辈的革命传统。”教室里安静下来后,我又问:“‘继承’和‘发扬’可以和哪个词搭配?”一会儿,一名学生回答:“‘继承’
In class, I showed a sick sentence: “We must inherit and carry forward the revolutionary cause of the older generation.” Let the students modify it. After everyone looked, someone raised his hand. I let a classmate find the wrong place first, then modify. The classmate replied: “To develop and to do something wrong, to get rid of 'and carry forward', and read the revised sentence. I affirmed his answer, and instead asked everyone: ”Which words can you match with“ development ”and what else does the sentence mean?“ One classmate replied: ”Development can be matched with tradition. The sentence can be changed to 'We want to carry forward the revolutionary tradition of the older generation.' “Several other students spoke one after another and changed the sentence to read:” We should inherit the revolutionary tradition of the older generation. “” We must inherit and carry forward the old Generation of revolutionary traditions. “” We must inherit the revolutionary cause of the older generation and carry forward the revolutionary tradition of the older generation. “After the classroom was quiet, I asked again:” Which of the following words can 'inherit' and 'carry forward' “A while later, one student replied:” 'Inheritance'