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一、书面表达题回顾假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。(满分25分)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。二、学生范文呈现作文编号:100200405三、作文评析(一)作文亮点第一段,开头感到温暖。文章开头使用“How is it going?”这样的问候语,一下子拉近了与外教Ms Jenkins的关系,使该封信
First, the written expression of review assume that you are Li Hua, summer vacation want to go to a foreign trade company part-time, has written an application and resume (resume). Write a letter to Ms Jenkins, a foreign teacher, and ask her to change the text and format of the accompanying materials. (Out of 25 points) Note: 1. The number of words around 100; 2 can be appropriate to increase the details, so that coherent writing. Second, students Pham Van presents composition number: 100200405 Third, essay evaluation (a) writing highlights the first paragraph, at the beginning feel warm. The article starts with a greeting such as “How is it going?”, And suddenly closes the relationship with Ms Jenkins, a foreign teacher, so that the letter