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案头摊放着李清的作文簿、小练笔、剪贴本。我一篇接一篇细细地读着。尽管事先对她的写作水平已有足够的估量,知道她在三个月内连获“徐汇区‘日清杯’作文竞赛一等奖”和“上海市第十届作文竞赛二等奖”;教她的语文老师也曾不止一次夸她:“李清的作文篇篇够得上发表水平。”可是,读着读着,我仍禁不住惊愕。这样老到的文笔、如此深邃的思想竟然出自17岁高二学生——那个梳着刘海、清纯文静得近于羞赧腼腆的女孩子
The desk was covered with Li Qing’s portfolio, small pens, and scrapbooks. I read one carefully after another. Although she had enough estimates of her writing skills in advance, she knew that she won the first prize in the “Xuhui District’s Nissin Cup” essay contest “” and “” the 10th Shanghai Composition Competition in three months. The award “;teacher’s language teacher also praised her more than once:”“Li Qing’s composition is enough for the publication level.” However, I could not help but be amazed when I read and read. Such old writing styles and such profound thoughts actually come from a 17-year-old high school student, a girl who has a bangs, a pure, quiet, and shyness.