以上三篇学生习作,各有特点:李军的文章在写实的基础上,进行了虚构,通过对比手法,彰显出亲情的无价;付逸枫的文章写得很开阔,思接千载,行文流畅,文采飞扬,很有见地;段光辉的文章构思较好,选材角度新颖,表现出来的现实意义很强。美中不足的是:李军的文章,语言很朴实,灵气不够;付 The above three student assignments have their own characteristics: Li Jun’s article is based on realistic, fictional, contrasting techniques, showing the priceless affection; Fu Yifeng’s article is very open, thinking after a thousand years, The writing is fluent, the literary talents are flying high, and the insights are great; Duan Guanghui’s article is well-conceived and the selection of materials is novel. The realistic meaning expressed is very strong. What is in the ointment is: Li Jun’s article is very simple and insane;