此文两个“笑”字出彩——“谁笑到最后,谁最美”——作者行文,避开这句熟语的文字,而用它的内涵构思文章：在开篇时让“外表光鲜,心里阴暗”的金鱼先笑,在结句中让“外表丑陋,身孕珍珠”的海蚌后笑。但是,结句中“冲着它”三字应删除,否则有损“笑”意。 The two “smiling” characters in this article are colorful—“Who is the last to laugh, who is the most beautiful?”—The author writes, avoiding the words of this idiom, and conceives the article with its intension: at the beginning, “the appearance is bright and the heart is happy. The darkened goldfish laughed first and then laughed at the jellyfish, which was “ugly and pregnant.” However, the word “shattering it” in the sentence should be deleted, otherwise it would be detrimental to “laugh.”