刘丹同学的作文其实是边读边想,边走边看的是作家三毛、陈丹燕、王旭峰。她激活了自己的想像,便看到了戈壁滩、塞纳河与西湖。如此处理题目,倒也不即不离,比较别致。淋淋拟生命之路为冰峰化水而成溪流而成江河而奔向大海的历程,沿途边走边看,感受美好,也体会到了人生的丰富与生 Liu Dan's composition is actually read while thinking, while walking to see the writer San Mao, Chen Dan Yan, Wang Xufeng. She activated her own imagination and saw the Gobi Desert, the Seine and the West Lake. So deal with the problem, it is not far from that, more chic. Lin leaching the path of life for the Bingpeng of water into streams and rivers into the course of the sea, walking along the way to see, feel good, but also appreciate the richness of life and students