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写作靠的是同学们平时点点滴滴的积累,英语作文更是如此,我们特意为同学们选编了小学英语作文系列,供大家学习。
在写这个题目的时候,我们先回想自己曾经发生过的不愉快的事情。可以描述事情发生的经过,自己如何处理这件事情,最后的心情感觉如何起伏变化。如果可以清楚地描述出不好的经验,那么,以后无论是要描写喜、怒、哀、乐等个人的情绪或心情就不再困难了。
中文里我们常用来描写自己感情的是哪三个字呢?就是“我觉得”这三个字。英文比中文更短,只要“I feel”就好了。糟糕的一天,主要在表现自己内心的感觉,所以,一开始就开门见山地把自己的心情写出来。我们第一段的建议开头句就是:I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
“糟糕的一天”一定是发生了什么不好的事情,才会让你觉得很糟的嘛,而且,不好的事情不止一件,可能还有很多件呢。一一把它们列出来吧,我们第二段的建议开头句就是:Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book ...
在发生一堆倒霉的事情后,心情真的是越来越不开心了。不过,所有坏运气都有过去的时候,赶快把这些不好的事情的结局交代一下,迎接将来美好的事物吧。我们第三段的建议开头句就是:Finally when I got home everything became much better.
下面让我们来看看杰西的文章:
Tips写作技巧:
第一段开头句:I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
第二段开头句:Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book and no pen.
第三段开头句:Finally when I got home everything became much better.
I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
In the morning my alarm clock didn't work and I didn't went school on time. In the kitchen my mum was angry and yelling at me. She thought I went to bed too late last night. On the way to school it started to rain and I forgot to bring my umbrella. What bad luck!
Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book and no pen. When I was eating my lunch I found the rice taste sour and there was a worm in my apple.
In the afternoon my stomach felt strange. It must be the sour rice. How could this be!
Finally when I got home everything became much better. My stomach was fine and my mother prepared a delicious dinner for me. After dinner I had a nice hot bath. Right now I felt great.
I hope everything can be fine tomorrow.
今天稍早的时候,我真的觉得很不开心,因为所有的事情都在跟我作对。
早上,我的闹钟坏了,害得我没有办法准时起床。到了厨房又被妈妈生气地吼了一顿,她以为是我昨天睡得太晚。在上学的路上下起了雨,而我又忘记带雨伞。真是倒霉。
更惨的是到教室后,我发觉带错书,又没带笔。吃午饭的时候发现饭馊了,而且还有一只虫在我的苹果里面。
到了下午,我的肚子就感觉怪怪的,一定是那馊了的饭,怎么会这样?
最后,当我回到家,一切又变得顺利许多。肚子不痛了,妈妈也准备了一顿美味的晚餐。吃完饭后,洗了个舒服的热水澡,现在我觉得还挺不赖的。
希望明天一切都顺利。
在写这个题目的时候,我们先回想自己曾经发生过的不愉快的事情。可以描述事情发生的经过,自己如何处理这件事情,最后的心情感觉如何起伏变化。如果可以清楚地描述出不好的经验,那么,以后无论是要描写喜、怒、哀、乐等个人的情绪或心情就不再困难了。
中文里我们常用来描写自己感情的是哪三个字呢?就是“我觉得”这三个字。英文比中文更短,只要“I feel”就好了。糟糕的一天,主要在表现自己内心的感觉,所以,一开始就开门见山地把自己的心情写出来。我们第一段的建议开头句就是:I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
“糟糕的一天”一定是发生了什么不好的事情,才会让你觉得很糟的嘛,而且,不好的事情不止一件,可能还有很多件呢。一一把它们列出来吧,我们第二段的建议开头句就是:Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book ...
在发生一堆倒霉的事情后,心情真的是越来越不开心了。不过,所有坏运气都有过去的时候,赶快把这些不好的事情的结局交代一下,迎接将来美好的事物吧。我们第三段的建议开头句就是:Finally when I got home everything became much better.
下面让我们来看看杰西的文章:
Tips写作技巧:
第一段开头句:I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
第二段开头句:Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book and no pen.
第三段开头句:Finally when I got home everything became much better.
I felt very bad early today because everything went wrong.
In the morning my alarm clock didn't work and I didn't went school on time. In the kitchen my mum was angry and yelling at me. She thought I went to bed too late last night. On the way to school it started to rain and I forgot to bring my umbrella. What bad luck!
Then in the classroom I found that I brought a wrong test book and no pen. When I was eating my lunch I found the rice taste sour and there was a worm in my apple.
In the afternoon my stomach felt strange. It must be the sour rice. How could this be!
Finally when I got home everything became much better. My stomach was fine and my mother prepared a delicious dinner for me. After dinner I had a nice hot bath. Right now I felt great.
I hope everything can be fine tomorrow.
今天稍早的时候,我真的觉得很不开心,因为所有的事情都在跟我作对。
早上,我的闹钟坏了,害得我没有办法准时起床。到了厨房又被妈妈生气地吼了一顿,她以为是我昨天睡得太晚。在上学的路上下起了雨,而我又忘记带雨伞。真是倒霉。
更惨的是到教室后,我发觉带错书,又没带笔。吃午饭的时候发现饭馊了,而且还有一只虫在我的苹果里面。
到了下午,我的肚子就感觉怪怪的,一定是那馊了的饭,怎么会这样?
最后,当我回到家,一切又变得顺利许多。肚子不痛了,妈妈也准备了一顿美味的晚餐。吃完饭后,洗了个舒服的热水澡,现在我觉得还挺不赖的。
希望明天一切都顺利。