【考场例文13】泛黄的照片广东考生[点评:标题观点不明,作者对“泛黄的照片”持何种态度,没有表明。作为考场作文,标题还是直接亮明观点为宜。]在以前(“以前”两字多余)黑白胶片的时代,照片很少,只记录下几个人生的瞬间,现在已是数码技术的时代,随时随地都可以拍照,记录着日常生活的点点滴滴。可是,我觉得即便现在的照片很多,但是值得珍惜的“点滴”也可能被稀释,始终还是已泛黄的照片 [Examination Venue 13] Yellowing Photo Guangdong Candidates [Comment: The title of the view is unknown, the author “yellowing photos ” what kind of attitude, did not indicate. As a test essay, the title is bright or direct view is appropriate. In the days before ( “before ” superfluous) black and white film era, photos are few, only recorded a few moments of life, now is the era of digital technology, can take pictures anytime, anywhere, recording the daily life Bit by bit However, I think even though there are so many photos now, it is worth cherishing that “dribbles” may also be diluted and always yellowed photos