评委意见:很难想象这是一个女孩子的文字。完全脱离了成长中的小忧伤、小情愫,作者将我们的视野引向了更宏阔的所在:“我”的寻找之旅。这里,有对流浪的幻想,有对亲情的驻守,有对自我的质疑等等。但所有的一切,又不是你我想象的样子。这里的幻想、驻守、质疑等,带 Judges Comments: It is hard to imagine this is a girl’s writing. Completely out of the growth of small sadness, little love, the author of our vision to lead to a broader place: “I ” of the search for the trip. Here, there are fantasies about stray, presence of relatives, questioning of oneself and so on. But everything is not what you and I imagine. Here’s the fantasy, stationed, questioned, etc., with