散文紧紧围绕“绿”这条线索,谋篇布局严谨得体,婉如玲珑透剔的建筑。或描写,或抒情,或议论,从容自如,浓淡相宜。作家从旅游和实际环境出发,为赏绿选了三个观察点:①山边;②梅雨亭;③潭边。从不同角度细致地描写了绿的形成,绿的环境,绿的美感和作家对绿的感情。虽然篇幅短小,由于布局合理,具体描写仍从容不迫,譬如对梅雨亭的刻划,它正对着瀑布,“踞在突出的一角的岩石上,上下都空空儿 Prose closely around the “green” clues, seeking layout strict and decent, such as exquisitely cut out of the building. Or description, or lyrical, or discussion, calm, comfortable and affordable. From the perspective of tourism and the actual environment, the writer selected three observation points for the reward of green: 1 hillside; 2 Meiyu Pavilion; 3 poolside. From different angles, the green formation, the green environment, the green beauty and the writer’s feelings for green are described in detail. Although the space is short and short, due to the rational layout, the concrete description remains calm. For example, the description of Mei Yu Ting is facing the waterfall. “Everything is up and down on the rock in the prominent corner.