★评委意见在当今城市化进程加速,“微时代”临近的节点,很难再看到一种原初的寻找生命归宿的反思精神和追怀意识了,所以本文的出现是令人惊喜的。“流动故乡”概念的提出,颇有新意。而作者的切入口很小,从自己家族的繁衍生息开始追溯,直至写到自我的出生、成长,读来如行云流水,顺畅之极。更难得的是,本文的细节描写细腻动人,既有触动情肠的真实感,又有可供描摹的画面感。总体上来看,本文血肉丰满,真情充溢,又上升到了哲理高度,经得起推敲。(肖尧) Judge opinion In today’s urbanization accelerates, “micro era ” near the node, it is difficult to see a kind of original looking for the reflection of life and remembrance consciousness, so this article is surprising. “Mobile Home ” concept put forward quite new ideas. The author’s cut-in entrance is small, from the proliferation of his family began to trace, until the writing of self-birth, growth, read as flowing, very smooth. Even more uncommon is that the details of this article describes the delicate and moving, both touch the real feeling of reality, but also have a sense of the picture can be traced. On the whole, this article is full of flesh and blood and full of true feelings. It rose to the level of philosophy and stood up to scrutiny. (Xiao Yao)