原文:乐于助人上海市静安小学三年级吴易轩有一天,一位叔叔tuī( )着小车,里头zhuāng( )着xǔxu( )多多的大苹果。很zhòng( )很zhòng( )。乐乐上前帮忙,叔叔说“:谢谢!”乐乐说“:不用谢。”乐乐觉得今天帮助叔叔真开心!美容师建议:这篇写话对于初步尝试写话的小朋友来说,算是写得很不错。咱们来看看,这篇写话写了一件事情,小朋友帮助别人的事情,首先,事情的整个过程写得很清楚,从乐乐发现需要得到帮助 One day, an uncle tuī () a car, which zhuāng () xǔxu () a lot of big apples. Very zhòng () Very zhòng (). Lele stepped forward to help, uncle said “: Thank you! ” Lele said “: no thanks. ” Lele feel really help today, uncle! Beautician recommendations: For that matter, it is well written. Let's take a look at this story, writing one thing, children helping others, first of all, the whole process of writing is very clear, from Lele found need to be helped