编者推荐：引述哲学家和画家的材料来立意,很有代表性,二者不仅在时空上相距很远,而且分属不同的学术领域和思维方式。从材料中引述出“观心”的立意,丝丝入扣,十分契合。标题宜更换为“留一只眼”——既能管住两个事例,又隐含立意。此文材料可变格用于“实用与奢侈”话题作文,其变格的途径是：将两件有关“眼”的材料变形,朝“够用就行”方向引述,还将目前文中已有的“用不着的东西如奢侈的摆设,留之又有何用”强化,以支撑话题。创造性地运用现成材料——符合高考发展等级“有创意”的要求。 Editor’s Recommendation: Quoting the philosophers and painters for their ideas, they are very representative. They are not only far apart in time and space, but also belong to different academic fields and ways of thinking. From the material, the concept of “concept of mind” was quoted, and it was perfectly fit. The title should be changed to “stay one eye” - both can hold two cases, but also implicitly. This article uses a metaphor for “practical and extravagant” topic composition. The way to change this sentence is to distort the two materials related to the “eye” and quote it in the direction of “enough on the go”. It will also be present in the text. “What don’t need, such as extravagant furnishings, and what to use,” is strengthened to support the topic. Creative use of ready-made materials - meets the “creative” requirements of the college entrance examination development level.