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In our daily life， we can t avoid associating with people in the world， so it is important for us to know how to get along well with others.
In my opinion， to get along well with others and win their friendships， we must remember the following words：
First， we need to be honest with others. Telling lies surely makes people stay far away from you. Just as an old saying goes， “Honesty is the best policy.” Second， we should be modest enough. If we are proud in public， we can hardly win others respect， not to mention “friendship”. Finally， we mustn t be selfish. We should learn to share. And we should learn not only how to care about others but also how to help the people in need.
If we obey the ways which is mentioned above， we will find it much easy to get along well with others.
教师点评：
这是一篇介绍如何与他人和睦相处的习作。全文主题突出，结构合理，详略得当。avoid、 care about、 hardly等词及定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等从句的运用体现了作者较强的写作功力。但如能将最后一段中的much easy改為much easier，表达会更加恰当。
（指导教师：赵耀卫）
In my opinion， to get along well with others and win their friendships， we must remember the following words：
First， we need to be honest with others. Telling lies surely makes people stay far away from you. Just as an old saying goes， “Honesty is the best policy.” Second， we should be modest enough. If we are proud in public， we can hardly win others respect， not to mention “friendship”. Finally， we mustn t be selfish. We should learn to share. And we should learn not only how to care about others but also how to help the people in need.
If we obey the ways which is mentioned above， we will find it much easy to get along well with others.
教师点评：
这是一篇介绍如何与他人和睦相处的习作。全文主题突出，结构合理，详略得当。avoid、 care about、 hardly等词及定语从句、宾语从句、状语从句等从句的运用体现了作者较强的写作功力。但如能将最后一段中的much easy改為much easier，表达会更加恰当。
（指导教师：赵耀卫）