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编完这一面学员诗页,很愉快,我觉得:以上这几首诗、语言都不错,颇有诗的氛围。杨庆良是位教师,他寄来三首诗。写得很认真,语词之间,有一股空灵飘逸之气,有些句子让人击节叫好。本想三首一并托出,但因本期篇幅有限,另二首只能留于案头,再择篇幅了。杨庆良诗的感觉和基本功都不错,目前较突出的问题是作品不够精炼,欠几分成熟,但我认为他很有希望。
After finishing this page of the student’s poetry page, I was very happy. I feel that the above several poems and languages are good and have a poetic atmosphere. Yang Qingliang is a teacher. He sent three poems. Written very seriously, between the words, there is an ethereal atmosphere, and some people make people feel good. The three wanted to be presented together, but due to the limited space in this issue, the other two can only remain on the desk and have another choice. The feelings and basic skills of Yang Qingliang’s poems are all good. At present, the more prominent problem is that the work is not refined enough and it owes a bit of maturity, but I think he has great hope.