黄爱华同学的这篇文章,着意阐释“我们无法苛求生命的伊始拥有满目的星光,但我们可以求取生命的一端——霞光满天”这一哲理,立意深刻。文章以孔子晚年知其不可而为之终成儒家学说、苏老泉大器晚成影响激励儿子成才作为论据,支撑自己的见解;层次清晰,说理透彻。 The article by Huang Aihua’s students aims to explain that “We cannot have a star-studded life at the very beginning of life, but we can seek the end of life—the glow of the sky”. In the article, Confucius knew that he could not do anything in the later years and eventually became the Confucian doctrine. Later, the influence of Su Laoquan’s large-scale device was inspiring his son to become an argument and support his own views; the level was clear and the reason was thorough.