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点评诗人但丁说过“生活中不缺少美而是缺少发现”。在生活中孩子们每天都被亲情包围着,往往容易忽视它,本文小作者以“天平”为喻,家庭作支点,一端是母亲,而另一端的自己总被高高地翘起,选取了生活中的一件小事——雨中送伞,体现了浓浓的亲情,使文章感染力极强。叙述妈妈送伞的过程自然生动,描写自己等伞时的心情以及路上同妈妈的对话简洁而朴实,加上对雨天的描写,使得情景自然融合。本篇语言自然质朴、结构紧凑,中心突出。另外善于抓住自己的心理变化进行精心细腻的刻画,也是本文的一大亮点。
Comment poet Dante said “life is not lack of beauty but lack of discovery ”. Children in daily life are surrounded by affection, often easy to ignore it, the author of this article to “balance ” as the metaphor, the family as a fulcrum, one end is the mother, and the other end of the total are high up, Selected a little thing in life - the rain umbrella, reflects the thick affection, so that the article highly infectious. The process of narrating mother’s umbrella is natural and vivid, the mood when describing his umbrella and the concise and simple conversation with mother on the road, together with the description of the rainy day, makes the scene naturally converge. The language of this article is simple and natural, compact, prominent center. In addition, being good at grasping their own psychological changes for elaborate and delicate portrayals is also a highlight of this article.