有些同学写记叙文 ,虽然思路清晰 ,叙事有条理 ,刻画人物形象 ,写景状物也能抓住特征 ,但往往写得肤浅 ,缺乏深意 ,犹如龙体画得虽好 ,但缺乏传神的眼睛。因此 ,写作中要画好“龙体” ,更要点好“龙睛” ,因为这是记叙文的精髓 ,写作的关键。那么 ,怎样才能点好“龙睛”呢 ?一 Some students write narrative texts. Although they have clear lines of thought, narratives are organized, character images are portrayed, and scenes can capture features, they are often superficial and lack profound meanings. They are like dragon paintings that are good but lack expressive eyes. Therefore, in the writing, we must draw a “dragon body” and make a good point of “dragon eye” because it is the essence of narrative writing and the key to writing. So, how can we point out the “Dragon Eye”?