1.观察生活,力求写实现在的中学生作文大多脱离实际,词句生编硬套,往往废话连篇,想到哪里写到哪里。如何改变这种现象呢?我们看一段峻青的《海滨仲夏夜》一文中的描写:“夕阳落山不久,西方的天空,还燃烧着一片橘红色的晚霞。大海也被这霞光染成了红色……”这段文字是在描写海 1. Observing life, trying to write in the middle school students mostly from the composition of the actual writing, quoting rigid sets of words, often nonsense links, where to write where they think. How do we change this phenomenon? Let’s look at the description of a piece of the “Mid Seaside Midsummer Night” article: “When the sun sets, the west’s sky burns with an orange sunset. The sea is also dyed red with this glow. ......" The text is describing the sea