每当我们做完一件事情后,总会产生一种情感,要么快乐,要么悲伤,要么沮丧……这是我们感情的自然流露。对于这份感受,我们写作时切不可忽视。表达感受时一定要真实,切不可人云亦云,或是一味地拔高。我曾经组织学生们观察生米和熟米,他们在比较中发现了生米粒和熟米粒之间有着许多的不同。然后,我请他们具体地写下自己的发现,并真实地表达出自己的观察体验。 Whenever we do one thing, there is always an emotion either happy, sad or depressed ... This is a natural expression of our feelings. For this feeling, we must not ignore when writing. Feelings must be true when expressing feelings, must not be unrelated, or blindly pull high. I had organized students to observe raw and cooked rice, and in comparison they found many differences between raw and cooked rice. Then, I asked them to write down their own specific findings, and truly express their own observation experience.