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庞余亮:与前面三篇小说都相比,这篇交给小说沙龙讨论的小说赋予了现代小说与先锋小说的特征,这篇小说的可能性相当多,小说的疆域一下子变大了许多。王魁:第一感觉,在1000字的篇幅内出现了四个人物,人物出场稍微快了点,有点杂乱。两条线,花开两朵,各表一枝,方向也截然相反,我觉得这篇小说最大的缺陷就是有些细节有些失真,部队过河有两个人淹死,同伴们怎么可能不去救呢?在一定的篇幅里出现众多的巧合是不合常理的,情节的真实要靠细节把
Pang Yu-liang: Compared with the previous three novels, this novel handed over to the novel by Sharon gives the characteristics of modern novels and avant-garde novels. The possibility of this novel is quite large and the fictional domain suddenly becomes much larger. Wang Kui: The first impression, in the 1000 words of space appeared four characters, appearances a little faster, a little messy. Two lines, two flowers, each one in the opposite direction, I think the biggest flaw in this novel is some of the details of some distortion, the force crossed the river two people drowned, how could companions not to save it? In a certain length of the many coincidence is not reasonable, the plot depends on the details of the truth