失误诊断这是2014年益阳考场上推出的一篇二类上等标杆文。从材料上看,当考生选择“书卷”作为写作对象时,就决定了文章必然有出彩的机会。从语言上看,一篇不足七百字的考场作文,出现的诗词、名言近十句,出现的经典人物近十位,语言可以称得上极为精彩。然而由于结构上的零乱,严重影响了作文的最后评分。究其失误,文章在结构上的失误主要表现在两方面。一是首尾缺少呼应,开篇用三个 Fault diagnosis This is a second-class benchmarking paper introduced at the Yiyang test center in 2014. From the material point of view, when the candidates choose “Book ” as the object of writing, it determines the article is bound to have outstanding opportunities. From a linguistic point of view, an examination of less than seven hundred words of essay composition, the emergence of poetry, famous quotes nearly ten, the classic characters appear nearly ten, the language can be described as extremely exciting. However, due to structural disorder, it seriously affected the composition of the final score. Investigate its mistakes, the article in the structural errors mainly in two aspects. First, the lack of echo, beginning with three