评语:这件篆书朱熹诗,用笔熟练,结字和章法遵循小篆法则,是一件很不错的篆书作品,作者已具备了自运创作的水准。不足之处:用笔不够圆转活通,尤其在线条的转弯处没有使笔锋平行画中,显得扁薄、漂浮。在结字方面,还没有对疏密关系做理性的把握,结构有些松散,布白过于均匀。另外,“鉴”、“源”、“徘”等字的篆法亦不准确。建议作者对清人篆书再作深入研习,领悟其用笔浑融清健,篆法方圆互参以 Comment: This seal Zhu Xi poetry, pen proficiency, knot words and chapters follow Xiaozhuan law, is a very good seal works, the author already has the standard of self-transport creation. Shortcomings: Pen not enough round of circulation, especially in the corner of the line did not make the pen front parallel painting, appears to be thin, floating. In terms of knot, there is no rational grasp of the relationship between density and density, the structure is somewhat loose, cloth is too uniform. In addition, “Kam ”, “source ”, “wan ” and other words of the seal method is not accurate. It is recommended that the author further study on the seal of the Qing dynasty, comprehending its muddy and clean with pen,