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写作是人类交际活动的基本形式，是人类运用所学语言表达自己思想的重要手段。英语写作是一种重要的语言技能，是最能考查考生英语运用能力的题型。高考《考试说明》中关于高考英语书面表达评分标准中有这样一段话：“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或高级词汇所致。”那么，考生运用高级词汇和复杂结构来提高书面表达的档次，笔者认为应注意几个问题：
一、注意在写作中使用好过渡性词汇，提高文章的连贯性。
1．时间、顺序
before long，just at this/that time，after a short time，very soon，one morning，first，second，then，at last，finally，in the end.
2．个人、观点
in my opinion，in the eyes of me，personally，personally speaking，as far as I know，in a word，what’s worse，worse still，to make the matter worse，to tell the truth，to be honest.
3．解释、说明
namely，that is to say，in other words，as a matter of fact，in fact.
4．转折、对比
but，however，while，on the contrary，otherwise.
5．递进、强调
what’s more，besides，in addition，above all，furthermore，indeed，moreover，at the same time.
6．因果关系
thanks to，as a result（of），therefore，because，because of，on account of，thus，due to，owing to.
7．并列、选择
for one thing，for the other thing，on one hand…on the other hand，both…. and，as well as，neither…nor，either…or，not only…but also.
8．举例说明
for example，for instance，take…for example，such as，like，as follows，and so on.
9．情感反应
to one’s surprise，to one’s joy，to one’s satisfaction，even，still，of course，also.
10．引起下文
as we all know，as is known to all，It is well－known that…，generally speaking.
二、合理使用动词或动词短语
1．避免使用相同词汇，增强表达的新颖性。
Lucy likes singing and Lily likes dancing，but I like reading.
→Lucy likes singing and Lily enjoys dancing，but I am fond of reading.
2．多用词组表达单个词义
Mike was killed in the accident.
→Mike lost his life in the accident.
3．使用助动词增强文章的感情色彩
I went to your school but I didn’t see you.
→I did go to your school but I didn’t see you.
三、使用各种复杂结构
1．介词短语
Our country is a beautiful country and it has a long history.
→Our country is a beautiful country with a long history.
2．V-ing形式
When we heard the news，we jumped with joy.
→Hearing the news，we jumped with joy.
3．V-ed形式
When he was asked why he was late，he went red.
→Asked why he was late，he went red.
4．感叹句
It is a fine day.
→What a fine day!
5．强调句型
I saw him in the street yesterday.
→It was in the street that I saw him yesterday.
6．倒装句
She could hardly believe her own eyes.
→Hardly could she believe her own eyes.
7．并列句
If you go straight on，you will see a church.
→Go straight on，and you’ll see a church.
8．名词性从句
The little boy won the first prize in the competition.
His father was satisfied.
→What satisfied the little boy’s father was that he won the first prize in the competition.
9．定语从句
The factory was built last year.
We visited the factory yesterday.
→The factory that we visited yesterday was built last year.
10．状语从句
She is a good teacher. We all love and respect her.
→She is such a good teacher that we all love and respect her.
11．虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink with all on board because there was the effort of the captain.
→But for the effort of the captain，the ship would have sunk with all on board.
總之，有效涵盖所有要点，主题明确，描述生动形象，有感染力，句式结构富有变化，语法结构较为复杂，语意连贯，表达流畅，逻辑性强，合理运用衔接手段，结构完整，详略得当，布局合理，大胆使用恰当修辞手段等是高考英语书面表达得高分的保证。此外，书写规范、工整、美观、卷面清洁，也很重要。
一、注意在写作中使用好过渡性词汇，提高文章的连贯性。
1．时间、顺序
before long，just at this/that time，after a short time，very soon，one morning，first，second，then，at last，finally，in the end.
2．个人、观点
in my opinion，in the eyes of me，personally，personally speaking，as far as I know，in a word，what’s worse，worse still，to make the matter worse，to tell the truth，to be honest.
3．解释、说明
namely，that is to say，in other words，as a matter of fact，in fact.
4．转折、对比
but，however，while，on the contrary，otherwise.
5．递进、强调
what’s more，besides，in addition，above all，furthermore，indeed，moreover，at the same time.
6．因果关系
thanks to，as a result（of），therefore，because，because of，on account of，thus，due to，owing to.
7．并列、选择
for one thing，for the other thing，on one hand…on the other hand，both…. and，as well as，neither…nor，either…or，not only…but also.
8．举例说明
for example，for instance，take…for example，such as，like，as follows，and so on.
9．情感反应
to one’s surprise，to one’s joy，to one’s satisfaction，even，still，of course，also.
10．引起下文
as we all know，as is known to all，It is well－known that…，generally speaking.
二、合理使用动词或动词短语
1．避免使用相同词汇，增强表达的新颖性。
Lucy likes singing and Lily likes dancing，but I like reading.
→Lucy likes singing and Lily enjoys dancing，but I am fond of reading.
2．多用词组表达单个词义
Mike was killed in the accident.
→Mike lost his life in the accident.
3．使用助动词增强文章的感情色彩
I went to your school but I didn’t see you.
→I did go to your school but I didn’t see you.
三、使用各种复杂结构
1．介词短语
Our country is a beautiful country and it has a long history.
→Our country is a beautiful country with a long history.
2．V-ing形式
When we heard the news，we jumped with joy.
→Hearing the news，we jumped with joy.
3．V-ed形式
When he was asked why he was late，he went red.
→Asked why he was late，he went red.
4．感叹句
It is a fine day.
→What a fine day!
5．强调句型
I saw him in the street yesterday.
→It was in the street that I saw him yesterday.
6．倒装句
She could hardly believe her own eyes.
→Hardly could she believe her own eyes.
7．并列句
If you go straight on，you will see a church.
→Go straight on，and you’ll see a church.
8．名词性从句
The little boy won the first prize in the competition.
His father was satisfied.
→What satisfied the little boy’s father was that he won the first prize in the competition.
9．定语从句
The factory was built last year.
We visited the factory yesterday.
→The factory that we visited yesterday was built last year.
10．状语从句
She is a good teacher. We all love and respect her.
→She is such a good teacher that we all love and respect her.
11．虚拟语气
The ship didn’t sink with all on board because there was the effort of the captain.
→But for the effort of the captain，the ship would have sunk with all on board.
總之，有效涵盖所有要点，主题明确，描述生动形象，有感染力，句式结构富有变化，语法结构较为复杂，语意连贯，表达流畅，逻辑性强，合理运用衔接手段，结构完整，详略得当，布局合理，大胆使用恰当修辞手段等是高考英语书面表达得高分的保证。此外，书写规范、工整、美观、卷面清洁，也很重要。