《文汇报》在6月26日发表了《不育妇女怀孕有望》的报道。《解放日报》在同一天也发表了《国产促性腺激素制剂通过鉴定》的报道。这两篇稿件分别由两报的记者自行禾写,取于同一题材,采用同一报道形式(消息),但在写作方面却存在着较大的差距。现在,我抱着学习和切磋的态度,试就这两篇诮息的标题、导语、背景材料运用、文字表达等方面,略作此较和剖析,用以求教于新闻界同行。 “Wen Wei Po” on June 26 published “infertile women pregnant expected” report. “Liberation Daily” also published the same day “made by the identification of gonadotropin preparations,” the report. The two manuscripts were written by the reporters of the two newspapers on their own, taking the same subject matter and adopting the same report format (message), but there was a big gap in writing. Now, with the attitude of learning and discussing, I try to compare and analyze the topics, introductory phrases, the use of background materials, and expressions in these two articles to seek advice from colleagues in the media.