1.优点:这封信写出了作者对老师的想念情怀,主要述说了自己在假期中的情况,条理清楚,对于已学过的一些短语使用准确。例如:more than,be good at,be interestedin,look forward to,hear from等,都用得恰到好处。2.不足之处:①badly与need,want,re-quire等动词连用时,其意义相当于very much,所以此句中badly应改为very much才符合习惯用法。注意:badly 1. Advantages: This letter out of the author's thoughts and feelings of the teacher, mainly about their holidays in the situation, well-organized, for some of the phrases learned have been used accurately. For example: more than, be good at, be interestedin, look forward to, hear from, etc., are used just right. 2. Shortcomings: ①addad and need, want, re-quire and other verbs used, the meaning is equivalent to very much, so the phrase badly should be changed to very much in line with the usage. Note: badly