美丽的大学校园,美丽的梦想,美丽的希望,有多少孩子为了这成功的一刻正在苦苦追求,风雨兼程。为了让我们的小读者不输在起跑线上,我们请来了复旦大学中文系二年级学生邵筱芳大姐姐为大家讲评作文。也许可以说,她成功的本身对小学生们就是一种鼓励;她对作文的讲评,也一定会给大家实实在在的帮助。理想就在不远处招手,小读者们,努力吧! Beautiful campus, beautiful dreams, beautiful hope, how many children are hard to pursue this moment of success, stormy. In order to make our young readers do not lose at the starting line, we invited the sophomore Shao Xiaofang, a sophomore from Fudan University Chinese Department, to write an essay for everyone. Perhaps it can be said that her success is an encouragement to the pupils themselves; her comment on the essay will certainly help everyone. Ideal is not far waving, small readers, work hard!