《〈从百草园到三味书屋〉修改稿品评》(见苏教版高中语文选修教材《语言规范与创新》,文题系编者所加)的作者朱正系鲁迅研究专家。他从鲁迅手稿与发表稿的比较对照中,揣摩作家的修改意图,体味其修改妙处。这样品评的确是极有益处的学习法:它在使我们明白文章不惮千遍改的道理的同时,也非常直观地让我们“看到”修改前后的情况,以及修改的好处,便于我们大家对照学习。然而智者千虑,必有一失。朱正对《从百草园到三味书屋》第二段 “From Baicao Garden to Sanwei Bookstore> revised article review” (see Sujiao version of high school language elective textbook “language specification and innovation”, the editor of the essay series) Zhu Zheng Department of Lu Xun experts. He compared the manuscript with the published manuscript of Lu Xun, try to figure out the writer’s intention to modify, appreciate its modification beauty. This review is indeed a very useful learning method: it allows us to understand the truth of the article without prejudice, but also very intuitively allows us to “see” the situation before and after the change, as well as the benefits of modification, to facilitate us We control learning. However, a wise man must have a loss. Zhu is right “from Baicao Garden to Sanwei Bookstore,” the second paragraph