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1. 你们应当把你们的物品保管好｡
误: You should take good care of your things carefully.
正: You should take good care of your things.
析: take good care of 有“认真保管好”之意,不应再与表示“认真地”意思的副词 carefully 连用｡
2. 只要他一回来,我就立刻告诉你｡
误: I will let you know at once as soon as he comes back.
正: I will let you know as soon as he comes back.
析: as soon as 含有“一……就”之意｡若用 as soon as 引導时间状语从句,主句中就不应再有表示“立刻”､“马上”之意的 at once, immediately, right away/now 等副词性词语｡
3. 我们不知道大卫什么时候回来｡
误: We don’t know when David will return back.
正: We don’t know when David will return.
正: We don’t know when David will come back.
析: return 有 come back 或 go back 的意思,故 return 不能再与副词 back 连用｡
4. 我们希望你们俩明天上午都能来｡
误: We hope that both you two could come tomorrow morning.
正: We hope that you two could come tomorrow morning.
正: We hope that both of you could come tomorrow morning.
析: both 与 two 都表示“两”的意思,两者不可以同时用在一个句子里｡
5. 他们还没有完成这项工作｡
误: They still haven’t finished the job yet.
正: They still haven’t finished the job.
正: They haven’t finished the job yet.
析: still 和 yet 都可用于否定句中,都可以表示“还”､“仍然”之意,但两者不可用于同一个句子中｡ still一般位于表示否定的助动词之前, yet 用于否定句的末尾｡
6. 大家都非常喜欢这个小女孩｡
误: Everybody all likes the little girl very much.
正: Everybody likes the little girl very much.
正: All of us like the little girl very much.
析: everybody 和 all 都表示“大家”的意思,但前者强调个体,后者强调整体,两者不能同时用在一个句子中｡
7. 这男孩名叫张鹏｡
误: The name of the boy is called Zhang Peng.
正: The name of the boy is Zhang Peng.
正: The boy is called Zhang Peng.
析: name 意为“名字”, be called 意为“名字叫”,两者在语义上是重复的,故不能同时用在一个句子中｡
8. 请把这个句子重复一遍｡
误: Please repeat the sentence again.
正: Please repeat the sentence.
正: Please say the sentence again.
析: repeat 含有“say sth again”之意,如果 repeat 之后再用 again,语义就重复了,故两者不能同时用在一个句子中｡
9. 战争结束以后,他成了一名医生｡
误: After the end of the war, he became a doctor.
正: After the war, he became a doctor.
析:介词 after 意为“在……以后”,而 end 意为“结束”,两者语义重复,不能同时用在一个句子中｡
10. 咱们步行去电院影好吗?
误: Shall we walk to the cinema on foot?
正: Shall we walk to the cinema?
正: Shall we go to the cinema on foot?
析: walk 本身有“步行”之意,故不可与同样表示“步行”意义的介词短语 on foot 连用｡
11. 你喜欢米饭还是喜欢面条?
误: Which do you prefer better, rice or noodle?
正: Which do you prefer, rice or noodle?
正: Which do you like better, rice or noodle?
析: prefer 本身有“较喜欢(like better)”之意,故不可与表示“较……”意义的 better 同时用在一个句子中｡
12. 我吃完早饭急急忙忙去上学｡
误: After breakfast I was hurrying to go to school.
正: After breakfast I was hurrying to school.
析: hurry 含有“匆忙走”之意,为避免语义重复,后面不可再接表示“走”､“跑”之意的 go, walk, run 等动词｡
13. 打篮球是汤姆最喜爱的运动｡
误: Playing basketball is Tom’s most favourite sport.
正: Playing basketball is Tom’s favourite sport.
析: favourite 含有“最喜爱的”意思,前面不应再用表示“最……”意义的 most 修饰｡
14. 这台电脑多少钱?
误: How much is the price of the computer?
正: What is the price of the computer?
正: What price is the computer?
正: How much is the computer?
析: how much 可以用来询问“多少钱”, price 意为“价钱”,为避免语义重复,两者不能同时用在一个句子中｡
15. 当老师走进教室时,学生们不再说话了｡
误: The students stopped talking when the teacher entered into the classroom.
正: The students stopped talking when the teacher entered the classroom.
正: The students stopped talking when the teacher walked into the classroom.
析: enter 有 come/go/walk into 的意思,是及物动词,其后应直接跟宾语,不能再跟介词 into｡
误: You should take good care of your things carefully.
正: You should take good care of your things.
析: take good care of 有“认真保管好”之意,不应再与表示“认真地”意思的副词 carefully 连用｡
2. 只要他一回来,我就立刻告诉你｡
误: I will let you know at once as soon as he comes back.
正: I will let you know as soon as he comes back.
析: as soon as 含有“一……就”之意｡若用 as soon as 引導时间状语从句,主句中就不应再有表示“立刻”､“马上”之意的 at once, immediately, right away/now 等副词性词语｡
3. 我们不知道大卫什么时候回来｡
误: We don’t know when David will return back.
正: We don’t know when David will return.
正: We don’t know when David will come back.
析: return 有 come back 或 go back 的意思,故 return 不能再与副词 back 连用｡
4. 我们希望你们俩明天上午都能来｡
误: We hope that both you two could come tomorrow morning.
正: We hope that you two could come tomorrow morning.
正: We hope that both of you could come tomorrow morning.
析: both 与 two 都表示“两”的意思,两者不可以同时用在一个句子里｡
5. 他们还没有完成这项工作｡
误: They still haven’t finished the job yet.
正: They still haven’t finished the job.
正: They haven’t finished the job yet.
析: still 和 yet 都可用于否定句中,都可以表示“还”､“仍然”之意,但两者不可用于同一个句子中｡ still一般位于表示否定的助动词之前, yet 用于否定句的末尾｡
6. 大家都非常喜欢这个小女孩｡
误: Everybody all likes the little girl very much.
正: Everybody likes the little girl very much.
正: All of us like the little girl very much.
析: everybody 和 all 都表示“大家”的意思,但前者强调个体,后者强调整体,两者不能同时用在一个句子中｡
7. 这男孩名叫张鹏｡
误: The name of the boy is called Zhang Peng.
正: The name of the boy is Zhang Peng.
正: The boy is called Zhang Peng.
析: name 意为“名字”, be called 意为“名字叫”,两者在语义上是重复的,故不能同时用在一个句子中｡
8. 请把这个句子重复一遍｡
误: Please repeat the sentence again.
正: Please repeat the sentence.
正: Please say the sentence again.
析: repeat 含有“say sth again”之意,如果 repeat 之后再用 again,语义就重复了,故两者不能同时用在一个句子中｡
9. 战争结束以后,他成了一名医生｡
误: After the end of the war, he became a doctor.
正: After the war, he became a doctor.
析:介词 after 意为“在……以后”,而 end 意为“结束”,两者语义重复,不能同时用在一个句子中｡
10. 咱们步行去电院影好吗?
误: Shall we walk to the cinema on foot?
正: Shall we walk to the cinema?
正: Shall we go to the cinema on foot?
析: walk 本身有“步行”之意,故不可与同样表示“步行”意义的介词短语 on foot 连用｡
11. 你喜欢米饭还是喜欢面条?
误: Which do you prefer better, rice or noodle?
正: Which do you prefer, rice or noodle?
正: Which do you like better, rice or noodle?
析: prefer 本身有“较喜欢(like better)”之意,故不可与表示“较……”意义的 better 同时用在一个句子中｡
12. 我吃完早饭急急忙忙去上学｡
误: After breakfast I was hurrying to go to school.
正: After breakfast I was hurrying to school.
析: hurry 含有“匆忙走”之意,为避免语义重复,后面不可再接表示“走”､“跑”之意的 go, walk, run 等动词｡
13. 打篮球是汤姆最喜爱的运动｡
误: Playing basketball is Tom’s most favourite sport.
正: Playing basketball is Tom’s favourite sport.
析: favourite 含有“最喜爱的”意思,前面不应再用表示“最……”意义的 most 修饰｡
14. 这台电脑多少钱?
误: How much is the price of the computer?
正: What is the price of the computer?
正: What price is the computer?
正: How much is the computer?
析: how much 可以用来询问“多少钱”, price 意为“价钱”,为避免语义重复,两者不能同时用在一个句子中｡
15. 当老师走进教室时,学生们不再说话了｡
误: The students stopped talking when the teacher entered into the classroom.
正: The students stopped talking when the teacher entered the classroom.
正: The students stopped talking when the teacher walked into the classroom.
析: enter 有 come/go/walk into 的意思,是及物动词,其后应直接跟宾语,不能再跟介词 into｡