孙婵老师执教的《横看成岭侧成峰———作文的多角度立意》这堂作文课,在2006年10月江苏省初中语文课堂教学大赛中获得了一等奖。这节课之所以受到评委们的一致好评,是因为它拂去了浮华,回归到本真,呈现出原汁原味的生态作文的特征。而这一点恰好是我们的作文教学公开课所缺少的,也是我们目前的作文教学所必需的。 The composing lesson of “Viewing Cheng Chengfeng from the side to the side—A multi-angle view of the composition” taught by Sun Yu’s teacher won the first prize in the Jiangsu Junior High School Chinese Classroom Teaching Competition in October 2006. The reason why this class was praised by the judges was because it had lost its glories and returned to its true nature, showing the features of authentic ecological compositions. This is precisely what we lack in the open teaching of composition teaching and it is also necessary for our current composition teaching.