这是杭州外国语学校初二年级一个班在学习完纪伯伦《组歌》中的《浪之歌》和《雨之歌》两首优美的散文诗后的当堂作文训练。能在老师的指导下当堂成就如此佳作,非常难得。编者刊出此次习作训练,是希望广大老师能够合理利用这种当堂训练的形式,充分发掘学生们的潜力。若有佳作偶得,欢迎推荐之。 This is a class composition training in the first and second grade of Hangzhou Foreign Languages ​​School after studying the two beautiful prose poems of “The Song of the Wave” and “The Song of Rain” in Gibran’s “Group Song”. It is rare to be able to do such a masterpiece with the guidance of a teacher. The editors published the training for this exercise. It is hoped that the teachers can make reasonable use of this form of training and fully explore the potential of the students. If you have a good job, please recommend it.