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高考作文“发展等级”中有一个“很深刻”的要求。作文运用材料,要向纵深开掘。下面介绍将材料写出深意的做法。一、逆锋运笔当事件向前发展到高潮时,反向落笔。本刊2005年3月号下半月《“你先挂”》,此文载体“你先挂”托起两个层面：第一个层面“母亲牵挂女儿”,母亲打电话到学校同女儿通话,每次的“结束语”都是“女儿,你先挂”；第二个层面“女儿牵挂母亲”,母亲出差外地打电话到家同女儿通话,当母亲再用过去的“结束语”时,女儿说“妈妈,这次你先挂”——反向落笔“你先挂”,接过爱的接力棒。
There is a “very deep” requirement in the “grade of development” of college entrance examination composition. Writing materials are used to dig deep. The following describes the practice of writing material ideas. First, the reverse movement pen When the incident moves forward to a climax, reverse pen. In the second half of the March 2005 issue of this issue, “You Hang Before You”, the carrier of this article “You hang first” holds up two levels: The first level, “Mother’s Daughter,” the mother calls the school to talk with her daughter. Each time the “concluding remarks” are “Daughter, you hang up”; the second level “daughter cares for the mother”, and the mother calls home to call with her daughter in the field. When the mother uses the past “concluding remarks,” the daughter says “ Mom, this time you hang on - “pen down” “You hang up” and take over the baton of love.