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失误原因:中心形象不突出题目:请以“校园中新开的彼岸花”为话题写作。张路比起曼珠沙华,我更喜欢葱兰。葱兰是可爱的。白嫩的花瓣摸起来像丝绸一般,仔细观察,还有一点透明;明黄的是雄蕊,白色的是雌蕊,两种颜色看了都叫人喜爱;花茎也是中空的,仿佛一用力,葱兰便会低下头来;小小的花苞也像一个小灯笼。埋下头用心地闻一闻,还会闻到特属于葱兰的味道。但它们不像曼珠沙华,没有明艳的色彩,也没
Reasons for mistakes: the center image is not prominent Title: Please write in the title of “newly opened Bana on campus”. Zhang Road compared to Manzhushahua, I prefer onion. Green onion is lovely. White tender petals feels like silk, careful observation, there is a little transparent; bright yellow is the stamen, the white is the pistil, two colors are loved; the stems are hollow, as if a force, the willow will Head down; little buds are like a little lantern. Buried his head to smell, but also smell special taste of onion. But they do not look like Manzhua sand, there is no bright color, nor