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【训练题一】
现在很多中学生都开启了自己的博客。一方面，他们把博客作为一个窗口来展示自己，也可以通过博客来缓解学习上的压力，因此越来越多的中学生接受这一形式。另一方面，有些家长和老师却认为整理自己的博客要浪费很多时间和精力，这样就会耽误学习。请针对这一现象谈谈自己的看法。
要求：1. 词数120左右；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：博客 blog
【思路点拨】
1. 审题。本文要求根据汉语提示写一篇文章，介绍中学生开启博客的情况。因为说明的是一种现状，主要使用现在时态。
2. 内容要点及对词汇和句型等表达方面的建议。
①开头说明情况：Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the internet.
②根据要点提示，分别说明开博客的好处和弊端：On one hand ... but on the other hand ...
③陈述自己对这一现状的看法：As far as I am concerned...
3. 对语句间衔接成分的建议。
①开篇点题，直截了当；
②使用适当的过渡词，使整个语篇衔接紧密；
③进行合理添加，使得文章更完整。
【参考范文】
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the internet.
On one hand, blogs can be a window to show ourselves and at the same time they can help to relieve the stress of study, which makes blogs popular with the young. But on the other hand, a lot of parents and teachers worry that the management of blogs may take too much time and energy, which may affect our studies.
As far as I am concerned, opening a blog is a wonderful idea for teenagers. Through blogs, we can present ourselves, share ideas; blogs can broaden our horizons as well. But of course, study should be put on the first place. So, why not open a blog of you own?
【训练题二】
假如你是李华的老师张梅，在高考来临之际，收到李华的一份求助信。在信中李华说，面对平时的考试测验，他感到很紧张。请你给他写一封120词左右的回信，建议他如何来克服考前紧张情绪。信的开头已写好，不计入总词数。
要点：1. 考前做好充分的准备工作；
2. 正确对待考试，不要过分强调分数；
3. 适当运动，作息时间有规律；
4. 你的个人看法。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn that you are always nervous about tests
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
Yours,
Miss Zhang
【思路点拨】
1. 审题。根据所给汉语要求写一封回信给李华，告诉他如何缓解考试的焦虑情绪。作为老师对他的建议，应用第二人称。时态采用一般现在时。
2. 内容要点及对词汇和句型等表达方面的建议。
①考前要做好准备工作：You should study hard and make full preparations.
②对待考试要有正确的态度，不要过于看重分数：
but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them ...
there is no need to worry too much about the results ...
③适当运动，劳逸结合：taking proper exercises will benefit you ...
④个人补充意见。
3. 对语句间衔接成分的建议。
①首先提出信的主题，直接明了。
②使用过渡词使整个语篇衔接紧密：as a matter of fact, besides, meanwhile等。
③倒装句式、it句型的使用为文章增色：
There is no doubt that ...
Only in this way can you ...
make it possible for you to ...
【参考范文】
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn that you are always nervous about tests. As you know, most middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever they’re taking important exams, just like you. There is no doubt that exams are really important to you, but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them.
As a matter of fact, exams are no more than a means of checking, and therefore there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should study hard and make full preparations. Only in this way can you avoid suffering from the great pressure of exams.
Besides, taking proper exercises will benefit you. For example, going out for a walk or doing some outdoor activities is of help to release your stress. Meanwhile, enough sleep can also make you full of energy and make it possible for you to perform well in the exams.
Don’t worry about it, and just try to relax whatever happens.
Yours,
Miss Zhang
现在很多中学生都开启了自己的博客。一方面，他们把博客作为一个窗口来展示自己，也可以通过博客来缓解学习上的压力，因此越来越多的中学生接受这一形式。另一方面，有些家长和老师却认为整理自己的博客要浪费很多时间和精力，这样就会耽误学习。请针对这一现象谈谈自己的看法。
要求：1. 词数120左右；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
参考词汇：博客 blog
【思路点拨】
1. 审题。本文要求根据汉语提示写一篇文章，介绍中学生开启博客的情况。因为说明的是一种现状，主要使用现在时态。
2. 内容要点及对词汇和句型等表达方面的建议。
①开头说明情况：Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the internet.
②根据要点提示，分别说明开博客的好处和弊端：On one hand ... but on the other hand ...
③陈述自己对这一现状的看法：As far as I am concerned...
3. 对语句间衔接成分的建议。
①开篇点题，直截了当；
②使用适当的过渡词，使整个语篇衔接紧密；
③进行合理添加，使得文章更完整。
【参考范文】
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the internet.
On one hand, blogs can be a window to show ourselves and at the same time they can help to relieve the stress of study, which makes blogs popular with the young. But on the other hand, a lot of parents and teachers worry that the management of blogs may take too much time and energy, which may affect our studies.
As far as I am concerned, opening a blog is a wonderful idea for teenagers. Through blogs, we can present ourselves, share ideas; blogs can broaden our horizons as well. But of course, study should be put on the first place. So, why not open a blog of you own?
【训练题二】
假如你是李华的老师张梅，在高考来临之际，收到李华的一份求助信。在信中李华说，面对平时的考试测验，他感到很紧张。请你给他写一封120词左右的回信，建议他如何来克服考前紧张情绪。信的开头已写好，不计入总词数。
要点：1. 考前做好充分的准备工作；
2. 正确对待考试，不要过分强调分数；
3. 适当运动，作息时间有规律；
4. 你的个人看法。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn that you are always nervous about tests
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
________________________________
Yours,
Miss Zhang
【思路点拨】
1. 审题。根据所给汉语要求写一封回信给李华，告诉他如何缓解考试的焦虑情绪。作为老师对他的建议，应用第二人称。时态采用一般现在时。
2. 内容要点及对词汇和句型等表达方面的建议。
①考前要做好准备工作：You should study hard and make full preparations.
②对待考试要有正确的态度，不要过于看重分数：
but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them ...
there is no need to worry too much about the results ...
③适当运动，劳逸结合：taking proper exercises will benefit you ...
④个人补充意见。
3. 对语句间衔接成分的建议。
①首先提出信的主题，直接明了。
②使用过渡词使整个语篇衔接紧密：as a matter of fact, besides, meanwhile等。
③倒装句式、it句型的使用为文章增色：
There is no doubt that ...
Only in this way can you ...
make it possible for you to ...
【参考范文】
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry to learn that you are always nervous about tests. As you know, most middle school students feel somehow nervous whenever they’re taking important exams, just like you. There is no doubt that exams are really important to you, but it’s more important to have a right attitude towards them.
As a matter of fact, exams are no more than a means of checking, and therefore there is no need to worry too much about the results. You should study hard and make full preparations. Only in this way can you avoid suffering from the great pressure of exams.
Besides, taking proper exercises will benefit you. For example, going out for a walk or doing some outdoor activities is of help to release your stress. Meanwhile, enough sleep can also make you full of energy and make it possible for you to perform well in the exams.
Don’t worry about it, and just try to relax whatever happens.
Yours,
Miss Zhang