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审题指导的目的在于使学生领会题意,作起文章来能围绕中心,选材恰当。第一篇作文命题是《大雨中》。这个题目的是根据暑假期间本地区连降大雨的实际情况拟定的。出题后,我就问:“对这个题目要特别注意哪个字?”开始有个学生回答:“要特别注意‘大’字。”我又问“有不同意见吗?”第二个学生回答:“我以为要抓紧‘中’字。”“为什么要抓紧‘中’字呢?”我立刻追问。“这个题目指明要我们写的是下大雨的时候发生的事。不写大雨以前,也不写大雨之后,才符合‘中’字的意思。”学生回答得很好,但问题并没有完全解决,于是我又问:“大雨中的事很多,写哪一些才有意义呢?”学生稍加思索后,相继发言了。有的说:“要着重写大雨中干部帮助社员克服困难。”有的说:“要写社员和大雨作斗
The purpose of examining guidance is to enable students to comprehend the ins and outs, and to start an essay to focus on the center and select the appropriate materials. The first essay proposition is “heavy rain.” This topic is based on the actual situation of heavy rains in the region during the summer holidays. After the question was asked, I asked: “Which word should I pay special attention to?” Some students started to reply: “Pay special attention to the word” 大 “.” I asked again, “Are there any different opinions?” The second student replied : “I thought I should pay close attention to the word” 中. “” Why should I pay close attention to '中'? “I immediately asked. ”This subject points out that what we want to write is what happens when it rains. It does not mean that it does not rain before it rains.“ The students answered well but the problem was not completely solved , So I asked again: ”There are a lot of things in the heavy rains and what is the point of writing it?“ After giving some thought, the students spoke one after another. Some said: ”We should focus on writing cadres in the heavy rain to help members overcome difficulties.“ Some said: ”To write members and fight heavy rains