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思辨不足、论证不力作文示例及诊断“我轻轻地来了,正如我轻轻地走了。”(原文为“轻轻的我走了,正如我轻轻的来,”编者注)“挥一挥衣袖,不带走一片云彩。”徐志摩的《再别康桥》让我不禁想去了解这是怎样一个人。他与林徽因的故事,他在翡冷翠时期的散文,无不透出一股儒雅潇洒的情怀。品性澄淡则下笔悠远,我相信,一个雄浑壮阔的人是写不出“轻轻”“云彩”“走在翡冷翠雨后的路上”这些词句的。文章由作者笔出,言为心声,文如其人,文风即人。我们今天坐在这里考查语文作文也是为了了解这个考生的思想,就是认为文风即人。难道不是吗?
“I gently came, just as I gently walked away.” (Originally was “I walked lightly, as I gently,” Editor Note) “waved sleeves, do not take away a cloud. ” Xu Zhimo’s “Farewell to Cambridge” I can not help but want to know how this is a person. He and Huiyin’s story, his essays in Florence era, all reveal an elegant and elegant feelings. Character is light under the pen, I believe that a magnificent person can not write “gently ” “cloud ” “walk in the rain after the rain ” these words. Written by the author, the article as the voice, the text of the people, the style of the people. We sit here today to examine the language composition is also to understand the idea of this candidate, that is, that the style of writing is human. Is not it?