锦鳞难耐饵香诱,每欲沾唇便中钩。现世浮生应警此,莫因一念恨千秋。(2015.2《中华诗词》)宋彩霞点评:作诗本乎情景,孤不自成,两不相背。诗不外乎情事景物,情事景物不离乎真实无伪。一日有一日之情,一日之景,作者随景兴怀,因题著句,故景真情实。开头两句,明白如话,起承自然。然只眼前景、口头 Jin scales hard to resist the bait fragrant lure, every desire to dip lip will hook. Epidemic of the world should be the police, Mo Yan resentment ages. (2015.2 “Chinese Poetry”) Song Caixia Comments: Poetry is almost scene, lonely, non-contrast. Poetry is nothing more than the scene of the situation, the scene does not leave the true authenticity of the scene. One day the feelings of the day, the scene of the day, the author with King Hsing Hing, because of the title sentence, so King really true. The first two sentences, understand as the saying goes, naturally arise. However, only the future prospects, verbal