随文练笔,顾名思义,就是以课文为载体,根据文中某一亮点,随机进行写作练习,目的是深入理解文章主旨,学习文章章法结构,训练遣词造句能力,增加练笔数量,以提高学生的写作能力。但由于诸多的原因,学生练笔常出现浅薄与单薄的不良现象,主要表 With the practice pen, as the name suggests, is based on the text as a carrier, according to a bright spot in the text, writing exercises at random, the purpose is to understand the main thrust of the article, learning the structure of the essay, training words and sentences ability to increase the number of practicing pen to improve students’ writing ability . However, due to many reasons, students practice pen often shallow and thin bad phenomenon, the main table