这是一个学生日记中的一段话:今天妈妈买了一些蛋卷,蛋卷是由一些鸡蛋烘考而成的。外面一看,金黄发亮,可有食欲了,我尝了一口,味道好极了,又香又脆又酥,忍不住再吃一口,我大概吃了一半,正当我吃的津津有味时,我听见了急促的脚步声,妈妈回来了,只见塑料袋里的蛋卷,数都可以数得清。妈妈的头上像冒出了火一样,说:“你还要不要吃饭了?那只是给你当零食的!”我只好把塑料袋扎好。显然,这段话中除了错别字外,语句也不连贯,逗号、句号不会使用。这种现象在我们农村学校学生的作文中比较普遍,学生到了 Here’s a passage from a student diary: Today Mom bought some egg rolls that were baked from some eggs. Looked outside, shiny golden, there may be appetite, and I tasted a very delicious, fragrant and crisp crisp, could not help but eat again, I probably ate half, just as I relish, I heard the rapid footsteps, my mother came back, I saw the egg rolls in plastic bags, the number can be counted. Mom’s head, like a blaze of fire, said: “Do you still want to eat? It just snacks for you!” I had to tie the plastic bag. Obviously, in addition to the typos in this passage, the sentences are not coherent, and the commas and periods are not used. This phenomenon is common in the composition of our rural school students, the students arrived