批改作文是一件既费时间又磨脑筋的工作,有些作文甚至使人头昏脑胀,看不下去。一种情形是:叙事说理不能有话即长,无话即短。往往把一件本来简单的事情或一个本来明显的问题,用很多意义类似的语句翻来复去地写,唯恐别人看不懂。结果使语言拖泥带水,罗里罗嗦。另一种情形是:生拉硬扯地引用一些与文章内容没有什么关系的格言、名言、成语、典故以及掺用文 Correcting essays is a time-consuming and brain-stretching work. Some essays are even puzzling and do not stand. One kind of situation is: Narrative reasoning can’t be called for long, no words are short. It is often the case that an originally simple matter or an originally obvious problem is written over and over with many similarly-relevant sentences, lest anyone else read it. As a result, the language was sloppy, and Lorilleo was stunned. The other situation is: Students are quoting quotes, sayings, idioms, allusions, and idioms that have nothing to do with the content of the article.